Post by Hellbreaker on Jan 9, 2016 20:20:05 GMT -8
Fulgur blinks, mentally slapping himself as his opponent simply steps aside.Then the sword hits him. The armor resisted for a brief second, then it broke open, the blade slicing him and data leaking.
Ful gasps, and slashes hurriedly at Grade, but misses as the devourer continues spinning, slicing his leg. The young navi flinches, striking out again, and then suddenly he feels an impact on his head, and is staring down at the ground.
Post by Hellbreaker on Jan 10, 2016 7:23:27 GMT -8
Fulgur pushes at the leg holding him down, only to blinks as he's pushed away right as he let's out a punch at the knee.Blinking at the sight of the blade pointing at him, the young navi scrambles upright, getting out one last wild slash.
After that,he forms a shield, crouching behind it as tries his best to remain sturdy. Code, these wounds....Ful breathes in, lightning streamers flowing into his mouth and healing up some of his wounds. Didn't get rid of them, but at least it was more bearable now...
Post by Hellbreaker on Jan 11, 2016 15:26:50 GMT -8
[No problem, Centi!!! It's all good.^^)
Fulgur stays firm as the flames burst against his shield, though it pushed him back some.Examining, from behind the semi-clear barrier, the scorched forest floor that lay between him and his opponent, the young navi snorts. Luckily he had his shield...It had protected him.
Then Grade seems to recover as well, even bringing up lava. As the other navi points his weapon at him, Ful braces himself...only to blinks as the ground is hit.Yelping as he's enveloped by light, the young navi growls as he sinks into scalding ground, pushing the pain back as he grabs onto the rim of the still solid ground. Can't give up,can't give up!!
Post by Hellbreaker on Jan 11, 2016 18:17:48 GMT -8
Fulgur grunts, wincing as his armor begins to really heat up. Gaaaaaaaah... Ignore it, you aren't done yet!!! Fingers digging into dirt, he pulls himself out before he finished slipping in, sighing in relief. Code....that really hurt...
Switching to his casual gear before his over heated armor could scald him anymore, the young navi looks at Grade."....Good attack....wasn't expecting it...."Uh oh, he had Regen....Wearily raising his buster, Ful snorts."Ready to surrender?"
Post by Hellbreaker on Jan 11, 2016 21:25:08 GMT -8
Fulgur frowns."We had a deal...." His buster crackles, wavering, but lowers slightly.Man....Ful hoped he'd be able to get regen like that one day...Not a scratch on him...
He examines the scene as well.Code, this wasn't safe for travellers. Glancing at Grade, Ful sits cross legged, despite the winces such movement earns him, and 'meditates'. He was never the best with programming, but he could at least lower the risk factor.
Style: 18 / 30 Articulation: 13 / 20 Balance: 18 / 20 Length: 7 / 10 Emotion: 8 / 10 Judge Points: 7 / 10 (For this I just use an average of the other scores) Total Score: 71 / 100 (B Rank) +5 version bonus points for one version advantage = 76 / 100
Fulgur gets 70 EXP / 700 zenny before any modifiers you may have Grade gets 140 EXP / 1,4000 zenny before any modifiers you may have
Normally I'd type out a description explaining scores in each category but I'm a bit groggy atm and don't want to put this off any longer. Suffice to say both of you did a pretty good job and it was a fun read. Grammar issues sometimes made it hard to follow, moreso on Hellbreaker's part. Both of you need to watch your tenses - you each repeatedly switched back and forth from past to present in the same post. It should remain consistent throughout the battle.
You can each add an additional 5 EXP and 50 zenny to your base earnings if the fight is finished after this post.
Post by Hellbreaker on Mar 31, 2016 14:06:01 GMT -8
(Ok,thanks for the grading Snake! Let's finish this up.^^ BTW, anyone know if we can snag the Judging Bonus made by Raven? I know it's not completely to the requirements, but we have been waiting for a good while for the grade, and that is the point of the deal.^^
Ful breathes in and out, settling into a daze as his eyes shine just slightly, air around him humming as he begins to Program the area back to it's former state. The lava lessens, fading away as green comes back.
The young navi sighs, glancing around. Not completely repaired...But it was getting there, and should be safe enough for now. Once he'd rested enough to recover his energy,and did a little research, he'd finish it off. Fulgur brushes off his shorts, standing up with a wince.
As Grade speaks, he blinks, tilting his head. Wait a minute...The guy hadn't meant that? Well...at least it was a good spar. The boy nods, bowing slightly and responding softly."O-ok..I will...T-thank you for the b-battle."
Post by Hellbreaker on Apr 1, 2016 12:30:58 GMT -8
Ful blinks as Grade chuckles. Hmm? When the navi walks away, he waving goodbye, tilting his head at the transformation. Eh? Then Grade dissappears, the young navi's eyes widening at the woman's voice. D-deleted? But...how...He feels weariness settle in him, and bites his lip before glancing around, porting out. Rest, then fix this area. This battle...was over.