Post by Kman on Jan 20, 2015 20:53:41 GMT -8
Megami:
Style: 23.25 / 30
Articulation: 14.42 / 20
Balance: 18.75 / 20
Length: 8.2 / 10
Emotion: 9.42 / 10
Judge Points: 7.5 / 10
Final Score: 81.54 / 100
Scoring Rationale:
By Post:
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B.O.B.:
Style: 24.83 / 30
Articulation: 14.91 / 20
Balance: 19 / 20
Length: 6.33 / 10
Emotion: 8.66 / 10
Judge Points: 7.5 / 10
Final Score: 81.23 / 100
Scoring Rationale:
By Post
The winner by a (very) narrow margin, Megami! You both have a lot of room to grow and I'm excited to read other Roleplays in the future!
Megami: 145/1450
B.o.B.: 115/1150
(Alternatively, if this was a Freestyle fight (as you two really didn't...fight until the end):
125/1250 each. Obviously before all bonuses.
Style: 23.25 / 30
Articulation: 14.42 / 20
Balance: 18.75 / 20
Length: 8.2 / 10
Emotion: 9.42 / 10
Judge Points: 7.5 / 10
Final Score: 81.54 / 100
Scoring Rationale:
Style: I really dug the style between Megami and Xenneth, and I like that it's very much a NetOP and his Navi. There were a few times where I felt like it was you really could have done more to elaborate on that relationship. I know a lot of folks requested you tone down the back and forth, but as long as it isn't getting unwieldy, it's never bad to really push that here and there.
Articulation: This was your weakest point, I felt. There were a number of fragments in the posts which detracted from your prose and the way you were telling your end of the story. There were also a number of minor grammar errors, and more than a few times where incorrect word usage was given, making it difficult to follow the context of what you were trying to say. Make sure to proof-read when you can, or have a fresh pair of eyes look it over just to be sure.
Length: This was pretty spot-on. That one post of yours was more than a little short, but even so, you kept a good consistent length.
Emotion: Definitely your strongest suit. I always felt that I could tell exactly what Megami (and Xenneth) were going through. Nice job.
Judge Points: I never know what to do with these. I averaged the rest of the scores and increased it up to the nearest half-point.
Articulation: This was your weakest point, I felt. There were a number of fragments in the posts which detracted from your prose and the way you were telling your end of the story. There were also a number of minor grammar errors, and more than a few times where incorrect word usage was given, making it difficult to follow the context of what you were trying to say. Make sure to proof-read when you can, or have a fresh pair of eyes look it over just to be sure.
Length: This was pretty spot-on. That one post of yours was more than a little short, but even so, you kept a good consistent length.
Emotion: Definitely your strongest suit. I always felt that I could tell exactly what Megami (and Xenneth) were going through. Nice job.
Judge Points: I never know what to do with these. I averaged the rest of the scores and increased it up to the nearest half-point.
By Post:
Post 1:
Style: 21/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 9/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 2:
Style: 22/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 3:
Style: 23/30
Articulation: 12/20
Balance: 19/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 4:
Style: 23/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 19/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 5:
Style: 22/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 5/10
Emotion: 7/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 6:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 11/20
Balance: 18/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 7:
Style: 22/30
Articulation: 9/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 8:
Style: 23/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 18/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 9:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 18/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 9/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 10:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 18/20
Length: 10/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 11:
Style: 25/30
Articulation: 18/20
Balance: 17/20
Length: 9/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 12:
Style: 26/30
Articulation: 15/20
Balance: 16/20
Length: 10/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
Style: 21/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 9/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 2:
Style: 22/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 3:
Style: 23/30
Articulation: 12/20
Balance: 19/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 4:
Style: 23/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 19/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 5:
Style: 22/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 5/10
Emotion: 7/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 6:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 11/20
Balance: 18/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 7:
Style: 22/30
Articulation: 9/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 8:
Style: 23/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 18/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 9:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 18/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 9/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 10:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 18/20
Length: 10/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 11:
Style: 25/30
Articulation: 18/20
Balance: 17/20
Length: 9/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 12:
Style: 26/30
Articulation: 15/20
Balance: 16/20
Length: 10/10
Emotion: 10/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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B.O.B.:
Style: 24.83 / 30
Articulation: 14.91 / 20
Balance: 19 / 20
Length: 6.33 / 10
Emotion: 8.66 / 10
Judge Points: 7.5 / 10
Final Score: 81.23 / 100
Scoring Rationale:
Style: I really like B.o.B.'s style. It's very...clinical, in the way that he operates. He only states things that are to elicit a response from others, and just the way that he works is very interesting. He reminds me a lot of a friend's character on another board, and I really enjoy that style.
Articulation: Like Div, you had several instances where you used fragments over full sentences, which detracted from the reading. Another thing that was often done was using a number (4 instead of four) which breaks the immersion. I wasn't sure if that fell under Style or Articulation so I lowered both a small amount rather than strike one worse than the other.
Length: Your posts were a touch short, at times. You hit a good length here and there, but overall they lacked in this area. Alternating between speaking and action is a good way to increase it, though purple prose is to be avoided if possible.
Emotion: Very strong. I felt like B.o.B. was almost a scientist, doing experiments upon Megami in this scenario. It was a very good read.
Judge Points: I never know what to do with these. I averaged the rest of the scores and increased it up to the nearest half-point.
Articulation: Like Div, you had several instances where you used fragments over full sentences, which detracted from the reading. Another thing that was often done was using a number (4 instead of four) which breaks the immersion. I wasn't sure if that fell under Style or Articulation so I lowered both a small amount rather than strike one worse than the other.
Length: Your posts were a touch short, at times. You hit a good length here and there, but overall they lacked in this area. Alternating between speaking and action is a good way to increase it, though purple prose is to be avoided if possible.
Emotion: Very strong. I felt like B.o.B. was almost a scientist, doing experiments upon Megami in this scenario. It was a very good read.
Judge Points: I never know what to do with these. I averaged the rest of the scores and increased it up to the nearest half-point.
By Post
Post 1:
Style: 22/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 8/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 2:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 8/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 3:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 19/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 4:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 14/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 5/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 5:
Style: 23/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 8/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 6:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 17/20
Balance: 18/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 7:
Style: 25/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 8:
Style: 25/30
Articulation: 14/20
Balance: 19/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 8/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 9:
Style: 27/30
Articulation: 18/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 10:
Style: 26/30
Articulation: 18/20
Balance: 17/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 11:
Style: 28/30
Articulation: 15/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 12:
Style: 26/30
Articulation: 15/20
Balance: 15/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
Style: 22/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 8/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 2:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 8/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 3:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 19/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 4:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 14/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 5/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 5:
Style: 23/30
Articulation: 13/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 8/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 6:
Style: 24/30
Articulation: 17/20
Balance: 18/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 7:
Style: 25/30
Articulation: 16/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 8:
Style: 25/30
Articulation: 14/20
Balance: 19/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 8/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 9:
Style: 27/30
Articulation: 18/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 10:
Style: 26/30
Articulation: 18/20
Balance: 17/20
Length: 6/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 11:
Style: 28/30
Articulation: 15/20
Balance: 20/20
Length: 8/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
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Post 12:
Style: 26/30
Articulation: 15/20
Balance: 15/20
Length: 7/10
Emotion: 9/10
Judge Points: 7.5/10
The winner by a (very) narrow margin, Megami! You both have a lot of room to grow and I'm excited to read other Roleplays in the future!
Megami: 145/1450
B.o.B.: 115/1150
(Alternatively, if this was a Freestyle fight (as you two really didn't...fight until the end):
125/1250 each. Obviously before all bonuses.