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Post by Deleted on May 21, 2011 13:48:00 GMT -8
I finished this a few minutes ago and would like your opinions. I am planning on using this as my first Navi, but I'm unsure if it's quite finished. Any and all suggestions are welcome. Just click the spoiler to view.
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Post by notegg on May 21, 2011 14:59:41 GMT -8
>_>
Looks good to me. His looks look as if fierce, but his eyes tell a different story to me. Might wanna cut down on the ninja-ness though, very similar to shadowman (Face mask and scarf). I'd really love to hear his back story. Also, WELCOME to the MMM! I'm encore, and I usually never post in intros or birthday topics. Meh, no idea why I'm like that.
Go! continue with his design! Really good roots, add something that makes him unique. . .. ... By this point I'm a little carried away, so I'll let anyone else post now.
Edit: Wow... you have more fame then me... *Cries* LOL well, g'luck in your RP futures! >_<
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Post by Deleted on May 21, 2011 15:35:34 GMT -8
I agree with the comment about all the "ShadowMan" I laid on him. I really like characters from the series like Protoman, Bass.exe, and Zero who all rocked the tattered cloth look. I guess that all shined through a little too hard. My least favorite part of it overall is the rifle arm though.
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Post by notegg on May 21, 2011 15:44:44 GMT -8
Meh, the scarf was what annoyed me the most, I personally LOVE cloaks and this really shows on my character, Sorrow.exe. It is okay if you rip stuff off but... scarves just seem so overused. Tattered cloth would look very cool on this character, try the cloth elsewhere. LOVE the character so far, really.
'Bout the rifle, to me it looks okay, but its just me.
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Post by Paruga on May 21, 2011 15:47:47 GMT -8
Really? I like the rifle arm, myself. You know what you could do, you could have his arm be a regular arm and morph into the rifle. Or nix it all together. Either way, I like the design, and I can see a lot of potential for this navi, good, bad, or neutral. All around I like him.
One thing I do want to point out: I love the whole one-arm thing. That to me is a great design choice.
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Post by Deleted on May 21, 2011 19:15:45 GMT -8
I took your input and advice and finished up this alternate version. Again, let me know what you think and be honest!
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Post by "Bill" on May 22, 2011 17:24:32 GMT -8
Now he looks cowardly, and if that's his character, awesome! If not, aim for the more straight frown look, as if melancholy. Loving the Rifle-arm, and I like the almost tournaquet-looking cloth around his arm. I prefer the original color scheme but the right shoulder pad is a must.
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Post by Snakeskin on May 23, 2011 9:44:41 GMT -8
I'd say I prefer the second design, but I agree with Billy's note about his facial expression. Also, Paruga's note about a morphing arm would be useful if you ever want him to... pick things up. Or open doors. Or things like that XD
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2011 11:45:22 GMT -8
I definitely agree with the morphing arm, and I intend to mess with his eyes some more. It's taken me a serious amount of time to get this design "finished" (the mouse I was using doesn't work very well). I don't think he looks quite right for a Sniper/Shadow type though. Hmm...
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Post by "Bill" on May 23, 2011 11:51:59 GMT -8
Well, here's an idea. What about a shoulder cannon/rifle, that you fire with the hand you got, and the main essence of his sniper is a little almost scanner over his eye, stereotypical, but it works. The shadow for him could be that he ISN'T missing an arm, but has a phantom limb!!!
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2011 12:34:12 GMT -8
I would have to say that the phantom limb sounds like a bit of a stretch, but I find your suggestion of a shoulder mounted rifle to be most interesting. I think I might take a few cues from Eraseman's design when I get back to the drawing board.
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Post by Paruga on May 23, 2011 13:25:13 GMT -8
If there was a "Become a Fan" option on here, I would Become a Fan of Billy's post.
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Post by Deleted on May 24, 2011 15:50:24 GMT -8
Here we are again with version three. Let me know what you think. I think this is the best version yet.
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Post by "Bill" on May 24, 2011 18:23:43 GMT -8
I......Love...it...ALL!!!
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Post by Paruga on May 24, 2011 19:09:41 GMT -8
Dude he's freakin AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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