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Post by Paruga on Jan 3, 2010 17:43:14 GMT -8
Combatants:Aluminum & Open
Judge: Diamond Heckentash
Type: Single Judge
Story-advantage: N/A
Area: abandoned factory in an overgrown forest
Posts: 5 excluding intro.
~~ Aluminum ticked off a navi whom he had never seen before by accidentally shooting him in the foot with an aluminum shard. He now flees in hopes of finding a secluded place where he can attempt to plan and execute a retaliation. His NetOp is not around to jack him out~~
~~INTRO!~~
Soft mossy grass is violently crushed as Aluminum hastily speeds through the unknown forest, while at the same time avoids the pale shafts of light from the morning sun.
Aluminum:*Huff-huff* G-gotta...get...............a-a-away.
He leapt into the trees, hoping to cover more ground. He fell. His now bruised face was forgotten as the cool grass overcame him in his time of despair. Reality snapping back into his head he continued. As Aluminum trudged on, the roots of trees became more gnarled and grew closer together, making travel by foot nearly impossible.
Aluminum: Looks like teleportation is the only way.
Being only a V1 navi Aluminum could only travel short distances, a trait he would hopefully grow out of soon. Finally, relief overcame him like a wave of cool pool water on a scorching summer day. He saw an old, run-down factory on a 200-acre plot. Rust was found covering every square-inch of the building, the windows were smashed, and overgrowth was accumulating every area where doors should be. Aluminum jogged in, slashing at plant vines and cobwebs. The dank, musky area inside suffocated him, but at least it was refuge and a time to plan.
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Post by Shast on Jan 6, 2010 16:49:29 GMT -8
(You never specified if the story versions or what style this was. So I'm assuming the version bonus is off and it's single judge.)
A rustle of leaves blew behind Aluminum as he hacked his way through the seemingly jungle-like factory. The debris coated surface in which he stepped was glazed in a thick layer of moss and splotches of rust. Sending mixed vibes of of a time long forgotten and how quickly the new and advanced can be tossed aside upon its onlookers.
A loud chorus of chains dropped to the ground somewhere within the factory, each echo of their each splitting chimes seemingly louder than the last. Another crash, but this time the vine strung doorway in which Aluminum had entered was the source. There was a large metal box blocking the entrance that had apparently been held in the air by some pulley system. On the large box sat a figure shrouded in the blackness that now enveloped the factory, only the windows casting their grim lights in select spots.
The figure was small, no larger than half of Aluminum's size, its yellow eyes pierced the darkness with their soulless gaze; a large teeth showing grin slowly crept its way onto the figures face as its death greeting eyes locked onto its newly found prey and snarled.
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Post by Paruga on Jan 6, 2010 19:44:18 GMT -8
((OOC: OH MY GOSH!!!! *_* I completely forgot about no-story advantage and single judge! Thanks for reminding me! *_*))
~~1~~
Aluminum was caught off guard by the chains, but was completely dumbstruck by the blocked entrance and his pursuer. A large chill shot straight down his spine when he saw the deathly grin. He was further horrified when he heard the creature give a snarl. Lastly Aluminum was completely paralyzed when he saw the lifeless gaze of the yellow "eyes," which to him felt like two black holes, everything going in, nothing going out.
The suffocating air seemed to disappear as he could no longer breath or move at all. The only thing he could do was to wait for the creature's next move and utter these two sentences, two that had only fear in it.
All right you, you demon! Come on, there's nothing I can do!
He immediately wished he had kept quiet, being now at the mercy of his demonic chaser.He tried to look around for something, anything along the lines of a window or ledge, but his eyes were tranfixed on those two, evil eyes.
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Post by Shast on Jan 7, 2010 23:38:38 GMT -8
~~1~~
The creature vanished without a sound, only the streak of yellow left by his unfaltering eyes hinted at the direction in which the savage had gone. Almost as soon as he had vanished Gush reappeared dangling upside down from another chain, gripping it tightly, above his metal prey.
A few dreadful creaking swings and Gush vanished again, this time landing beside Aluminum in a tripping motion, tripping the much larger than he navi. As he finished the tripping motion he fluidly grabbed Aluminum by the head and slammed him into the ground while plopping himself on the now on his back Aluminum. With a data hungry grin Gush began ripping and shredding away at Aluminum recklessly...
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Post by Paruga on Jan 8, 2010 10:10:37 GMT -8
~~2~~
Aluminum's metal helmet clanged on the rusty ground as it flew off his head when he was tackled. Dark red cyber-blood trickled out of his chest as Gush hacked and ripped away. Through awful screams this could be heard echoing in the building...
AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!! Huh-huh-huh....Aaah! T-take...argh! THIS!!!!! Argh, Hweouh!!
Vomit flew into Gush's face. Those few seconds were all Aluminum needed to whip his arm around and shoot around after round at the midget. He wrestled with Gush, eventually launching him into the wall. Aluminum ran, grabbed his helmet, and assaulted Gush with it. He finally placed it on his head, and he started to saunter out the door, thinking it was the end. Weariness overcame him and he fell, vines cushioning his fall. Aluminum rolled over, and his open wounds unfortunately landed on the rusty part of the floor.
Ooomph, that's gonna hurt horribly bad in the morning.
Laughing to himself he brought himself up off the floor, staring right into the open eyes of Gush, slowly falling back into paralysis.
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Post by Shast on Jan 9, 2010 21:27:51 GMT -8
(That is one strange counter Paruga.)
~~2~~
As Aluminum walked away Gush slid to the ground, his body battered by his preys desperate adrenaline induced counter attack.. His eyes still open, but a deeper more intense yellow than before. The scent of leaking data was strong, it filled Gush's sense despite being drenched in vomit. The fleeting desperate ones always got Gush the most excited.
His eyes flickered between nothingness and an even more intense hue of yellow as the scent continued to overwhelm Gush. With every passing second his breathing grew heavier and the flickers more intense... Drool seeped from his mouth while his fingers twitched, eager anticipation emanated from every digital pore the savage imp of a navi possessed.
All in what seemed like a eternity of temptation was only a few minor seconds. Almost as soon as Gush hit the ground the flickering of his eyes stopped on the fierce yellow, and he sprang to life, the vomit he was coated in left him in favor of the rusted vine scattered floor as Gush pounced through the air ricocheting off miscellaneous factory equipment as he indirectly caught back up to his prey. Lust fueling his every move while his mischievous and sadistic nature filled his mind with ways to toy with his pitifully desperate yet upbeat quarry.
Gush landed on Aluminums chest and dug his claws into his victim. Gush pushed into his preys stomach with his feet and pulled the unlucky one forward with his arms just fast enough to face plant Aluminum into the ground while just barely escaping.
While mid-air and without skipping a beat Gush took a deep breath and exhaled vibrant red fire all over Aluminum, the blazing heat lighting the surrounding area while the vines cringed in pain as they were set ablaze. The expression on Gushs face never changed throughout this act, his eyes still glowing the deep yellow.
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Post by Paruga on Jan 10, 2010 12:30:04 GMT -8
(Yeah, don't know why I thought of vomit, oh well)
~~3~~
The smoke that eminated from Gush's mouth suffocated Aluminum and blinded him. The deadly flames danced across his face. As he drifted off into unconciousness, he silently whispered.
Is this...is it the end of me...?
He suddenly fell half-asleep, a dream floating into his sight. In it he was in a PET. A strange one. He heard a program being deleted and felt himself roughly being carried off....The scene changed. A greasy pocket surrounded his PET, and he heard a gruff voice from somewhere outside.
Say kid, you want a navi?
A teenage boy's voice came into play.
What?
Aluminum was lifted out of the greasy, foul pocket and placed into smooth hands.---------------------------------------------------->
((OOC: This came from Aluminum's background/RP sample))
Aluminum:Churro..churro...I-i can't leave you alone in this world!!!
Aluminum woke up, a new desire burning within him. His eyes weren't anywhere near as threatening as Gush's, but they blazed with rage. He looked around, trying to find Gush. Target sighted.
PINBALL ATTACK!
Two metal "boulders" were hefted through the flaming vines straight toward Gush. Aluminum knew Gush wouldn't be hit so easily, so he tried to think of a plan, yet none came to mind. Oh, well, looks like alumi-shard will have to do for now. He realized just how dangerous his surroundings were. He would die soon from suffocation and burned data. He teleported to upper levels of the factory, right behind Gush. He tried to give Gush a good old-fashioned punch to the back of his head, but Aluminum's blood loss was too great, and Gush cracked one of his ribs.
Aaaahhh....!!
Shoot. His cover was blown, and he couldn't attack. How could he beat Gush?!?!?!?
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Post by Shast on Jan 10, 2010 21:50:09 GMT -8
(You are making this way to one sided, unless you've got some last ditch effort super mode or something..) =|
~~3~~
The boulders shot up through the flames; catching Gush unaware and smashing right into him and from him into a Aluminum. The two were crushed against the factory wall, putting a large dent in it.
After several moments the large rust covered boulder rolled off of the crushed duo and crashed into the walk way slightly below the two. The impact caused the walkways rusted and feeble support to snap, and plummet to the ground far below, causing the factory itself to rumble just enough to shake Gush loose.
Gush's limp body gracefully fell and landed headfirst into the metal walkway. The impact awoke Gush from his daze and after a quick flurry of random swipes in every direction, he coiled back into his predatory stance, crouched over slightly, claws fidgeting and arms mostly outstretched. The smell of burning vines, smoke, and dust masked the scent of free drifting data, so Gush had to rely on his own two eyes to seek out his prey...
Meanwhile the fire had begun to ascend the vines that dangled from the ceiling of the factory.
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Post by Paruga on Jan 11, 2010 16:29:40 GMT -8
(Reeeaallyy sorry about that, I have a tendancy to be that way, I'll do better, trust me. *_*)
~~4~~
Aluminum slowly and painfully crawled out of the wall.
aluminum:Come on Aluminum! Gotta pick it up!
Aluminum charged down the stairs to Gush, delivering a hefty knee to Gush's stomach. A clenched fist followed soon afterward right to Gush's face.
Aluminum: Can't see me can ya? Powerless with all this smoke huh?
Aluminum teleported all around, in and out of smoke. He deftly landed on the stairs of the building and through red-rimmed eyes aimed his arm at Gush. He fired away, missing a few rounds, making some. Once he had his fun, he teleported around a little more, then squared away in front of Gush.
Aluminum:All right, time for my specialty, hand to hand combat!
for this special occasion Aluminum quickly took off his helmet and chucked it through wilted, burning vines and out of a window on the second-floor. His short, chocolate brown hair smoothly waved around as Aluminum shook it roughly. The hot smoke swirled around it, a new crown for the navi. A sly smirk signaled for his opponent to get ready for a fight.
Aluminum: Hmph.... You may have gotten me before, but if I'm going down, you're going with me!
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Post by Shast on Jan 11, 2010 23:03:17 GMT -8
~~4~~
An ear twitched, his eyes deepened, the hungry fang showing grin returned in an instant. The sound of metal on metal echoed, though smoke clouded his primary sense, harkening to every minor sound Gush would be able to find his prey. Though able to hear, pinpointing the direction was an endeavor with a timer to fast for even Gush, as through the smoke a large face planted itself square in his face, knocking him back while temporarily blinding him.
with each blow Gush retorted with a sharp low pitched data scattering snarl. He swayed his head back and forth at a futile attempt to dodge the already scattered array of projectiles.
His vision finally returned in a flicker of red flames in front of him, the smell of fire dethroning the blissful scent of soot and smoke. His eyes faded to a seemingly calm yellow, his near black figure began to pour a mix of deep blue and faded grey onto the ground; giving some slight detail to Gushs once pure black figure.
His indescribable leather attire and steam punk fashioned gadgets revealed themselves, the gloves and vest; ripped and shredded at the fringes, the boots made of undeniably refined bronze, reinforced with more Bronze.
Aluminum casted his helmet to the side and arrogantly displayed himself to Gush, he cocked his head to the side, emotionless, a challenge was it? Clearly this one had some bite, but to think he could escape the fate of a meal was something any prey of Gushs could only dream of.
The comment that followed the display was the trigger, Gush slithered through the floors debris and dug his right hands claws into Aluminum's right fibula. The energy and seeped from Gush had an elemental property to it, heating anything around Gush to well over 100f, and anything touched was either set ablaze or turned a several burnt.
The claws dug into Aluminum even further as Gush kicked off the ground dragged Aluminum by the leg along for the ride. With an abrupt spin the claws retracted from the leg and flowing with the momentum Gush planted a swift kick to Aluminums face. Gush grinned as he followed the kick by flinging the now boiling hot data he had on his other hand at the prima donna navi in a downpour of red rain.
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Post by Paruga on Jan 12, 2010 16:27:36 GMT -8
(Pr-prima donna?!?! It's go time now!!!!!)
~~5~~
The fierce embers landed on Aluminum in speedy succession. As he fell, the flames burned away his crimson shirt even more than what was already gone. When Aluminum landed roughly on the ground floor, he noticed he was waaay more red than he should be.
He leapt up to the second floor, level to the dangerous demon. Aluminum dealt several glancing blows to Gush's chest, and jumped back on a vine that would soon burn like the others surrounding it. Once he had enough swinging power, Aluminum leapt from the branch and tackled Gush. He aimed his arm at Gush and started firing away at its legs, wanting it to feel the pain he had suffered.
Aluminum:How d'ya like me now?
Aluminum jogged half-way down the stairs and slipped on ash. He landed wih a thud on the rusty floor, his face inches away from scorching flames. His eyes started to tear up, the smoke getting to him. He painfully straightened up, the rust starting to take its toll on him from when he rolled on it earlier. He crawled slowly up to where Gush was, remembering he was still alive. Aluminum transformed is arm into a stout, dense metal bar, getting ready to deal his Knock-Out Attack.
He closed his eyes and swung, feeling a part of Gush's head come in contact with the weapon. Aluminum solemnly opened his eyes, into the soft yellow ones of Gush.
Aluminum:I'll never forget those eyes for as long as I live
Aluminum ran down the stairs and stopped a few feet from the door. He smirked and said aloud...
Aluminum:Looks like he just needed to know who was boss... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
End of Aluminum's turns.
Good game Shast.
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Post by Shast on Jan 12, 2010 23:06:45 GMT -8
(Yes, and clearly you don't understand what Gush is and does. You don't get away from him.. So, pardon the violence, and you do know despite hitting the turn limit we can still continue if we feel like it. It's just the first 5 posts each(unless otherwise stated) that gets judged.) ANYWAY! ';.;'
~~5~~
Gush lay limp, the bar connecting full on with his deterred form. His eyes unfazed, continued their eerily calm gaze. With Aluminums final comment Gush's extremities twitched. The aura seeping from it was replaced by a pitch black flow of twisted shadows and energy, sketching in and out of existence as a ghost. His body heaved itself up, battered, tattered and bruised, but his body managed to stand straight up. Gush turned his eyes to Aluminum and flexed his claws, cracking them in the process.
With no warning or sound a wall of static electricity erupt from the ground blocking Aluminums departure, Gush crouched between the gate of yellow light and the would be escapee. He cocked his head and his claws flared up; one with fire, the other electricity, both appeared to be dripping an acidic green liquid. Every drop that reached the floor made a low hissing sound and made its make on the history stained tiles.
Gush spun once sending a quick flurry of acid in all directions. Following this moving his fluidly finished the spin with a claw swipe uppercut with his acid drenched flaming hand; clawing Aluminum up the middle and following up with a back flip and kicking his prey in the jaw, possibly knocking him backwards... If given the chance.
Gush had back flipped high enough that he was eye level with Aluminum at his crescendo. Gush grin returning for a sharp second before vanishing behind the veil of shadows that still shrouded Gush as he grabbed Aluminum by the top of his head with his Electric dancing hand; digging his claws into Aluminums' skull.
Gush pulled him forward and kneed him square between the eyes several times alternating between knees. Each blow the face more powerful than the last, before finally Just relinquished his grasp on Aluminums head and he flew backwards from the final strike to the face. Gushs' face had the utmost look of satisfaction on it as he crept his way over to his next meal...
(If you wanna keep goin' do it up, but it's judge ready now, Diamond.)
Ya big silly ya can't stop a bug with a blow to the face! Ya gotta stop 'em with fire, or perhaps a lot of ropes. *shrugs* =p
oh oh~ Perhaps abusing the machinery in the factory would have helped. I should've done that..
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Post by Xypher on Jan 14, 2010 12:56:39 GMT -8
Alrighty boys! Here be your stuffs! As this is meh first time, If ya have questions, or want to know why I put what I put, or want comments, or whatever, ask meh! And, If ya want a secondary opinion, ask a mod, so we ALL can learn. lol.
Aluminum Misc: 8/10 Style: 22/30 Length: 7/10 Balance: 13/20 Emotion: 8/10 Articulation: 15/20
73/100 B
Gush Misc: 8/10 Style: 24/30 Length: 8/10 Balance: 16/20 Emotion: 8/10 Articulation: 17/20
81/100 A
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Post by Paruga on Jan 14, 2010 18:22:19 GMT -8
Yeah I looked for your stats page part about Gush, Shast, and I didn't find him for one of two reasons:
a)His thread was not found by me
OR
b)I was too lazy to extensively read your stats page (no offense)
Yeah, I was planning for a fire to start, but you went and used uber fire breath powerz.
Thanks fer the rating Diamond! Good job Shast, and I'll leave continuing the fight up to you.
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Post by Shast on Jan 16, 2010 22:09:36 GMT -8
haha, I'm not saying it's impossible, just that you either put him down for good or he'll get ya. Oh if I continue the fight I'll just you... and what fun would that be for you?! It's also fine you couldn't read my whole stats thing, to be honest, I barely read any ones. =P
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