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Post by wannabeholy on Apr 27, 2006 18:43:30 GMT -8
GGAAAHHHH!!! CAN NO ONE SEE? THE DISASTER THAT HAS BE FAlLEN ME?
TOrutured and torn, here I lay
once again amongst the slain
can no one see?
I'm dead unto thee!!!
tis that why I go unheard?
am I no longer cared about anymore?
GAH!!! MYSELF MY SELFISH SELF
BECAUSE OF IT I NOW WAIL!!! HELP!!!
PLEASE SAVE ME!!! PLEASE SAVE ME!!!
FOR A DEAD MAN ART I!!!
FOR A STICK IS INPALED IN MY EYE
MY VISION IS UBSCUERED!!!
MY HEART BEYOND CURE!!!
now here I lay....dead and lame.....tortured.......and slain
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RockGirl
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?The only person you are destined to become is the person you decide to be.?[C01:pink]
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Post by RockGirl on Apr 27, 2006 18:47:00 GMT -8
Woah. That... was...AWESOME!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!
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Post by wannabeholy on Apr 27, 2006 18:51:54 GMT -8
...if only I could rejoice with thee.....but alas a different sight is cast upon me....
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RockGirl
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Post by RockGirl on Apr 27, 2006 18:53:00 GMT -8
^___^
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Post by wannabeholy on Apr 27, 2006 18:54:45 GMT -8
can thou also not see....the disaster that has fallen me? I appreciate your complimentery remarks, but the things I write come from the heart......all you see before you eyes...come from my insides
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Post by Chaos on Apr 27, 2006 21:33:27 GMT -8
Um... Thou shouldn't fear as such pains are driven away by a light true and clear. A light of such strength is never to far, so what plagues the? Famine perhaps war? If the darkness shakes the then turn to another! A friend or maybe a brother? As once said by those young and older, one man can lift a stone but two can lift a boulder!
Was that okay?
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Post by Twon on Apr 28, 2006 6:24:23 GMT -8
*Sitting in the audience applauding* Bravo! Bravo! Encore!
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Post by wannabeholy on Apr 29, 2006 19:05:54 GMT -8
I like it man!!! has a really nice ring to it!!! ^_^!!!!
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Post by Chaos on Apr 30, 2006 9:36:50 GMT -8
Thanks!
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Post by Warrior on May 13, 2006 16:00:54 GMT -8
WOW! I wish I could write stuff that rhymes. The best I've got are homophones. (hey/hay--peek/peak---two/to/too---etc.)
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2006 14:49:30 GMT -8
yeah yeah same here..... *while clapping* oh well =/
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