Post by Hawkman.EXE on Jun 9, 2005 13:11:52 GMT -8
Jake: *talking to his Norm Navi* man, i can't wait. my dad is gonna take me and my friend bird watching! this'll be awesome!
Dad: Come on Jake, time to go.
Jake: Yes! I finally get to go see some cool birds.
Norm navi: Yes. This is great.
Dad: Hurry up! Or you might miss some birds!
Jake: Right. Come on James(norm Navi's original name)
*Get's in car*
Jake: Hey dad, what about my friend?
Dad: he said he couldn't make it.
Jake: Oh.
For the rest of the ride Jake sat and talked with James.
Jake: I can't wait! this is so awesome! i wonder if we'll see some neat birds.
James: Well the area we're going to is the perfect place to see a cool hawk, and i've heard it's very friendly. We might get to see it up close.
Jake: That would be so awesome!
When they got there they saw all kinds of birds. There was a crow, some sparrows, a falcon and some robins.
Jake: man, i love birds.
James: yes, they are quite fascinating.
Then Jake saw the Hawk that James was talking about.
Jake: Hey, James. Check it out, there's the Hawk! Lets go closer.
Jake walked and saw a glint from it's beak.
Jake: What's that?
James: Seems to be a program chip.
Jake: Cool, maybe we can have it.
They walked over to the rock where the hawk had left the chip. There was a weird picture of a birds shadow.
When they got home, Jake put James down and hooked him up to his computor.
Jake: You ready?
James: Sure.
Jake: Alright, here we go!
Jake put in the chip and went to sleep.
The next morning he was awoken by a beeping. Then he heard a voice that said "wake up, it's almost timefor school.
End of chapter 1.
So, what do you think? i'll post the rest later.
Dad: Come on Jake, time to go.
Jake: Yes! I finally get to go see some cool birds.
Norm navi: Yes. This is great.
Dad: Hurry up! Or you might miss some birds!
Jake: Right. Come on James(norm Navi's original name)
*Get's in car*
Jake: Hey dad, what about my friend?
Dad: he said he couldn't make it.
Jake: Oh.
For the rest of the ride Jake sat and talked with James.
Jake: I can't wait! this is so awesome! i wonder if we'll see some neat birds.
James: Well the area we're going to is the perfect place to see a cool hawk, and i've heard it's very friendly. We might get to see it up close.
Jake: That would be so awesome!
When they got there they saw all kinds of birds. There was a crow, some sparrows, a falcon and some robins.
Jake: man, i love birds.
James: yes, they are quite fascinating.
Then Jake saw the Hawk that James was talking about.
Jake: Hey, James. Check it out, there's the Hawk! Lets go closer.
Jake walked and saw a glint from it's beak.
Jake: What's that?
James: Seems to be a program chip.
Jake: Cool, maybe we can have it.
They walked over to the rock where the hawk had left the chip. There was a weird picture of a birds shadow.
When they got home, Jake put James down and hooked him up to his computor.
Jake: You ready?
James: Sure.
Jake: Alright, here we go!
Jake put in the chip and went to sleep.
The next morning he was awoken by a beeping. Then he heard a voice that said "wake up, it's almost timefor school.
End of chapter 1.
So, what do you think? i'll post the rest later.