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Post by Nightshade on Mar 15, 2018 17:28:53 GMT -8
Nightshade was...unbelievably fast. In some occasions, bending space was a possibility. Still, the speed Gregar gifted him was beyond normal navi limits. Instant transmission witha perpetual lock on the target. It did not matter if Nightshade got his eyes poked out. He would still be able to sense and snap onto target with accuracies that make aimbots look like kiddies.
A midair spin and Nightshade's feet claw would kick Golem to a complete stop. Blink and the navi was already back onto target smashing the guys head into the ground. From there, Nightshade would stay on top of Golem, sinking both his feet and hand claws into the guy to keep him pinned down. He pushed his weapons furthe in, twisting and ripping. He would make sure to send a clear wake up call to his opponent. He wanted to meddle with a cybeast, he would have to satiate his thirst for destruction.
"More...MORE!" He roared in Golem's face, ripping his right claw out before sinking it back into his bulky opponent. With their faces nothing but mere inches apart Nightshade wanted to push the guy under him over the edge. He would force him to use everything he got before reminding him why you don't mess with a Juuka. He liked when prey squirmed and wiggled beneath him. He enjoyed the weak squeaking of the ones writhing in pain in his grasp.
He tightened his grip, pressing his whole body down on Golem. He was very determined to inflict as much pain as possible. Besides, everyone knew that nothing makes you feel more alive than pain does. He wanted his opponent immensly pkssed off and completelyout on adrenaline. If they were going to go all out he wanted to make sure his opponent was up to the task.
"GROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!!! FIGHT ME! FIGHT. ME. MORE!"
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Post by Mega on Mar 18, 2018 12:34:04 GMT -8
[Battle 7] =======================================
And Golem was getting the message. But was Nightshade truly ready for the response? While Nightshade literally dug into him, Golem's body reflexively reinforced itself with a glossy sheen over the stone portion of Golem's body. The fact that Nightshade was still able to do some damage through it was just telling Golem that he needed to hut Nightshade harder. "C'mon Golem! Don't just lay there and take it! You don't know how long he can maintain that form. But you're not going to make him burn through it faster on your back!" Golem's Operator said, definitely feeling like a fan in some kind of sporting event. Not an awful feeling. And almost as if instant, Golem's arm shot up and grabbed Nightshade by the tail.
"Excessive force, granted."
Three very scary words were all Golem said before his arm snapped sideways, tearing Nightshade off of his body, and into the ground. Splitting it on impact, Golem got up and stamped his foot once. Forcing the ground beneath Nightshade to launch him up, Golem then kicked off and headbutted Nightshade. Still moving forward, Golem's movements triggered more chunks of the ground to shoot up only for Golem to ram Nightshade through each of them without losing speed. After about a few or so, Golem finished up by slamming Nightshade into the ground and splitting it from the sheer force.
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Post by Nightshade on Mar 18, 2018 13:03:04 GMT -8
NOW WE ARE TALKING! That was just the kind of pain he needed to feel alive. Oh boy, he found the perfect sparring partner. The guy could take the brunt of his powers and still come back at him twice as hard.
Nightshade's eye exploded with unending thirst for destruction. The ground just, ceased to be. it would instantly be vaporized by the full release of the Juuka's powers. He forced himself back up even though Golem was pressing onto him with all his weight. His whole body was aching badly, but the pain would soon be drowned in adrenaline. Well, the navi version of adrenaline. Nightshade's systems overclocked. A single one inch punch was enough to clear the clouds from the sky. everything that found itself in front of the beast for a good thousand meters was instantly razed.
Suddenly, Nightshade was on top of Golem, then to his left, right, up down, right, left rig-left dow-up. He was too fast to follow. One strike after the other, with nothing but utter destruction of the opponent in mind. Claw, slash, rip, strike, shatter. Fire, water, electricity. explosions, beams. It was a ruthless and aggressive assault on multiple fronts. Yet, Nightshade knew the opponent would not fall to that. His heart rejoiced at the thought. He could really go all out.
The beast stopped only after there was no movement was felt for a good while. Still, he leaned back on all fors and morphed one of his hands into a LongSword. However...it was slightly more powerful than the common chip attack. The bade shared his own colors and the buzzing of superheated plasma could be heard in the short vicinity. In all his life, only two people ever survived a direct cut from Chaos. Would this opponent be worthy?
Well, he was going to find out soon enough.
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Post by Mega on Mar 18, 2018 13:50:07 GMT -8
[Battle 8] ====================================
And this dance of destruction would continue, with Golem back on the defensive. But he was not standing still to weather another storm. His systems would go into autopilot, energy shields flaring to life to block attack, and his body would brace itself for impact with Golem's own agility and ingenuity for the rest. It was by no means a graceful display. But darn, it was still impressive to see the giant wade through attacks the way he was. How many people tried blocking attacks by punching them?
And then there was a break, Golem's eyes now a searing white through the smoke of it all, locking onto Nightshade. Everything aside, this is what he was made for. Not fighting specifically. But things like Nightshade. Atleast that's what he felt deep within his code. With his mind and body on the same page, seeing the blade, Golem went off instinct and concentrated as much bracing around one of his hands as he could. And grabbed the blade with a deep, bellowing howl of an injured beast.
The heat of the blade was not stopped completely. But on reflex Golem's hand simply tightened around it in an attempt to break it, feeling his hand literally falling apart. And then he simply tugged hard on it, forcing Nightshade off his feet and right into the downward swinging fist of Golem. Golem drove Nightshade headfirst into the ground, driving his fist and Nightshade straight into the ground. For a brief moment, sound went completely silent, and colors become photo-negative. And then the ground within 100 feet of them just... ceased to be. It was almost as if Golem just deleted the very data simply from the force of his attack. Golem pulled his fist away, glancing at the other now basically destroyed hand of his.
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Post by Nightshade on Mar 19, 2018 0:46:42 GMT -8
With an endless void now encasing their surroundings, Nightshade would, once again, slowly rise to his feet. It was a good thing he had barriers installed in his data. Another pounding like that one and he would actually get deleted. Judging by the state of the guy's fist, it looked like not much was left in him. Unless he really wished to destroy himself.
Nightshade's ravenous bloodlust receded. While he thorougly enjoyed allowing his mind and body to commute with Gregar and fight without restrictions, he wasn't there to kill someone.
"...You know, you shouldn't do that. Destroying yourself hardly ever lets you win against an opponent. I speak with personal experience."
Nightshade took that moment to regain stamina and better observe the huge navi. He would concede him a couple more scuffles if he wished, but it looked like he had fully satisfied what he had been asked to do. The little zoanoroid hopped on Golem's lap, studying him intently. All in all, the little cat navi was very curious about the guy. "I think I have seen you before. Or at the very least, I have heard of you. Wait..."
He pointed his long sword at the floating screen that functioned as the window to the other world. "Oi, kiddo, what's your name?" He asked at Golem's new operator.
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Post by Mega on Mar 21, 2018 17:05:34 GMT -8
[Battle? 9] Sidenote: Making me name a background character xD ==================================
Golem's body gave off steam after exerting itself, and he settled himself down. His eyes returned to normal, and his navi mark also returned to it's normal glow. Normally, Golem would have totally become inert and immobile; like an actual statue. But after his updates, that was no longer the case. This was... different. "Morgan Stone," Golem's operator replied. Everything had calmed back down now.
Golem despite actually being active, seemed to be staring at a specific point somewhere outside their surroundings. It was actually a minute or two before he seemed to acknowledge Nightshade was there, and that he said something. "One life, to safeguard many," Golem stated simply. That seemed to imply that he was infact willing to destroy himself if it meant putting down a threat that could take many lives.
Even after the fight, Golem still looked like he could throw down. He was worse for wear based on the damage to his body and armor. But he did not seem to be affected by it like another navi. Or maybe it was more the fact his design simply allowed him to continue functioning after extensive damage.
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Post by Nightshade on Mar 22, 2018 5:01:48 GMT -8
"Wait. Stone? Like the old Mr.Stone and...did I just fight that Golem? Woah that is so cool!"
Nightshade reverted back to the way he was when he entered in a burst of purple flames. "You're that famous guy who fought 50 Mega Viruses all at once? I thought you were deactivated alongside your old operator!"
Nightshade cuddled up further on the guy's lap. "Gah, my whole body aches. You win this time you big guy. Your armor's real tough. I hardly even scratched it. Although...you still shouldn't try to destroy yourself like this..."
The little cat navi lightly poked Golem's chest with the tip of his sword. "How can others be saved if there is no one to save them?" He added. Nightshade couldn't lie though, being near Golem would make anyone feel safer. The cat navi curiously obseved the other navi, interested in the guy's armor. That was something that he had never seen before. It took a beating from Cybeast Central and was still mostly intact.
Nightshade looked up at the floaty screen. "Hoi! Morgan! I know this sounds strange but...can I have a copy of Golem's Armor.sys please?"
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Post by Shast on Mar 25, 2018 15:23:08 GMT -8
The screen changed from the young man to a much older looking gentleman with an elongated face and curly mustache. He perked up his glasses. At the cuff of his neck an OEL badge dangles by a thin thread with the name "Lodlan, Reigis" printed on it.
In a firm but slightly nasal voice he responded The files are private and not open to the public. As per the agreement signed when you came to this closed test server the zenny has been deposited into your account. Thank you for your aid, Nightshade.
With that the lab tech turned away from the screen and began speaking directly to Morgan. Morgan, this navis systems are specially desig- is all he hears before the screen disconnects, and he is shunted out of the private server and back into Electopia proper.
In the real world, the man continues. -ned to withstand the impact from unnaturally strong sources. As you saw in the test. We did not contract this navi by accident. Your grandfather wished for you to have the most durable navi, and we at OEL owed him that debt at least. You however, now stand at a crossroads of responsibility.
The man cleared his throat, before continuing. By accepting your grandfathers navi you must agree to never share his code with others. Among the numerous legal reasons, should it fall into the wrong hands it would be especially problematic. He adjusted himself in his chair, and outstretched his hand to Morgan. Between the two on the console is a screen displaying Golems system.
Judge points based on music selection. Both are good, but only one can be the true winner of the 10!
legolas Style: 24/30 Articulation: 19/20 Balance: 18/20 Length: 10/10 Emotion: 9/10 Judge: 10/10
Total: 90/100, 135/1350
Your pacing was good. The communication between Netop and Navi isn't something most people(myself included) do on this site so its refreshing to see. You fleshed out the environment, the purpose, and utilized the navis size well.
My only suggestion would be to try and embellish Golems offense actions. While reading I could feel the weight behind some moves, but not most. For example his first rolling charge into the air... thing. The crash into the ground didn't have the impact I think you intended.
ns Style: 23/30 Articulation: 12/20 Balance: 14/20 Length: 9/10 Emotion: 8/10 Judge: 7/10
Total: 73/100, 85/850
The same comments from your K-414 fight apply here. Your post length is better. Midrange posts read much easier. You are too controlled in your beastout still, and shutting it off at will it seems counter intuitive to the mindless rage you're intended to be in. When dropping out maybe try and make it seem like you're coming back to your senses. Channeling the beast should be the same as becoming a DM controlled werewolf in DnD. As that's essentially what this is. You also lost points for practically copy pasting a post from the aforementioned battle. Changing only a few words. Bad form yo!
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