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Post by Archer on Jan 19, 2005 12:00:18 GMT -8
Friends: Amiah.EXE, Suki.EXE, Elecman, NapalmMan, PZ, ShadowMan(I think)
Rivals: Beastman
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Post by Archer on Jan 19, 2005 12:08:28 GMT -8
Chapter 1: The X-Programs *Scene fades in and you see an old man hunched over a P.E.T.*
Old Man: That should be the last bug fixed from the X-Programs
*A tall young man with yellow hair in a flat top is sitting in a green padded chair next to him*
Man: It had better be the last bug, if the government finds out it has bugs, they will shut us down quickly, are you prepared to deal with that Dr. Yuka?
Dr. Yuka: Yes, I'm quite confident that was the very last bug in the whole system, so what will you do with this one right here*looks at the man* Sgt. Reeds
Sgt. Reeds: What do you mean?
Dr. Yuka: This one has a bug that I can't get rid of
Sgt. Reeds: Is the bug serious
Dr. Yuka: Depends, you see*pulls down a chart of data* he has lost his ability to figure out what is deadly to his system
St. Reeds: So he is basically a dare devil with no judgement?
Dr. Yuka: You could say that
*Sgt. Reeds gets out of his chair and walks over to Dr. Yuka*
Sgt. Reeds: Set him loose on the net
Dr. Yuka: Why?
Sgt. Reeds: He is bound to mess with something that he shouldn't, and when he does, he will be deleted
*Dr. Yuka pulls out his P.E.T.*
Dr. Yuka: Nave
*Dr. Yuka's Norml Navi appears on the screen*
Nave: Hello Dr. Yuka, what is needed
Dr. Yuka: Get rid of X0951
Nave: Ejecting....process done
*Dr. Yuka puts the P.E.T. up*
Sgt. Reeds: So he's gone?
Dr. Yuka: Yes
Sgt. Reeds: Perfect, now let's get back to the other X-Programs
*Scene fades out*
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Post by Archer on Jan 19, 2005 12:09:10 GMT -8
Chapter 2: Another Day *Scene fades back into a cozy looking bedroom full of battlechips appears, all of a sudden, the silence is broken by a man's voice*
Voice: Llyod, get down here right now!!!
*A hand appears on the edge of the covers and suddenly flips back the sheets, reveiling a young teen of in his pajama's, he got up and put on his hoodie and pants and went downstairs grabbng a very peculiar thing, as the boy gets ready to sit down, he hears his fathers voice*
Dad: And you had better not have your bow or quiver at this table Llyod!
Llyod: I don't*he says as he quickly stuffs them under the table*
Dad: Eat up, i made your favorite, pancakes
Llyod: thanks dad!
*after eating his meal, he grabs his bookbag and Quiver along with his bow*
Llyod: I'm going to school now, bye
*A metalic voice cuts through the air*
?: You aren't taking that with you
Llyod: Shhh Artiz
Artiz: Ok
*On the screen of Llyod's P.E.T. stood a normal navi, with his default weapon, arrows*
Atriz: Are we really going to school?
Llyod: No way, we are going to the arcade and battle
*Llyod walks out the door*
*scene fades out*
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Post by Archer on Jan 19, 2005 12:09:44 GMT -8
Chapter 3: The Disobeying Hero *Scene fades in and you see Llyod with his P.E.T. standing in front of an arcade called Nickels and Navis*
Llyod: Alright, we made it, I thought for sure dad would catch us
Atriz: You should be skipping school, what would your father say?
*Llyod shoves his P.E.T. back in his pocket*
Llyod: Don't be such a spoiled sport
*muffled noises come from his pocket*
*Llyod enters the arcade, while pulling his P.E.T. back out*
Llyod: Let's check out the battling area
Artiz: Fine *Bow appears in his hands* but promise me you won't ever skip school again
Llyod: *Rolls his eyes* Fine, now let's go battle!
*At the machine, Llyod is looking around but not seeing anybody*
Llyod: That's odd
*Intercom announces*
Intercom: Please clear the arcade, we are under attack by 100 viru...correction, 200....correction, 300 viruses
Llyod: Darn, that's alot of viruses
Artiz: I must agree
*Inside an arcade game's Cyberspace, a red normal navi with a black V on his head is walking around with a mini virus breeder in his hand*
X0951: Wow, do I keep making these *scans the viruses* 300 mettaur detected, wow that's alot...oh well
*back in the arcade*
Artiz: We must do something
Llyod: Why
Artiz: A navi is being detected inside that machine *points at the one with X0951*
Llyod: Fine, go in and get him, then come straight back!
Llyod: JACK IN, Artiz!!!
*Artiz appears on the other side of the machine, away from X0951*
Artiz: *Notches an arrow* Are you seeing this Llyod?
Llyod: Yeah, that is alot of viruses, so where is the navi?
Artiz: Scanning....in the middle of it
Llyod: He is as good as dead, jack out Artiz
Artiz: No, I can save him *let's an arrow fly, deleting a mettaur*
Llyod: No you can't, jack out now!
Artiz: He needs my help, and I'm going to help him
X0951: They appear to be hurting him, wow, what a weapon...scanning....scan complete *bow appears in his hand* this a nice weapon, I will use it *starts firing at mettaur*
Artiz: Uh...there is too many
Llyod: Then just jack out!
Artiz: NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Artiz fires off 200 arrows, all hitting the opponents*
Llyod: Wow, when could you do that?
Artiz: Never mind
*the remaining 100 mettaur gang up on Artiz and fires a giant shockwave*
Lylod: JACK OUT
Artiz: NO!
*Artiz fires 100 arrows through the wave deleting all the mettaur, alas, Artiz is hit by the shockwave*
Llyod: NNNNNOOOOOO!!!! ARTIZ
ARTIZ DELETED
X0951: Wow, he truly an awesome navi
Llyod: yeah, he sure was something
X0951: He was a hero, he gave his life for me
Llyod: Yeah, there will never be another like him
X0951: In order to honor his death *X0951's body starts molding* I would be honored to be your new navi, and my weapon will be arrows, just like Artiz
Llyod: Sure, but for now just leave me alone
X0951: Fine, but from now on, call me...Archerman
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Hawkman.EXE
New Recruit
Hawkman, Champion of the wind!
Posts: 60
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Post by Hawkman.EXE on Jun 9, 2005 13:31:34 GMT -8
cool. no, not cool. awesome! yours was good.
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Post by That Guy on Jun 19, 2005 15:57:28 GMT -8
:P... Artiz is a cool name...
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