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Post by stefjenova on May 24, 2010 18:46:08 GMT -8
[bgcolor=000000]Raven8/TORNADOMAN: Style: 29/30 Articulation: 20/20 Balance: 19/20 Length: 9/10 Emotion: 9/10 Judge Points [Feel]: 8/10 Total: 94/100 - The one knock that I had was that three of the posts broke my "epicness" limit. I love your RP and I love the way you do it, but in a 6-post battle, I felt that 3 "epic" posts, in length and in emotion, was a little over the top. Very well done, and I have no problem with the way the attacks were written and executed.
shasticus/IRIA: Style: 28/30 - Your style contrasts nicely with Raven's; where he was epic, well-described and explosive, you were measured, clear and concise, and also appropriately descriptive. It was a joy to read. Articulation: 19/20 Balance: 19/20 Length: 10/10 Emotion: 9/10 - Sometimes, you seemed almost too measured and didn't capture the effect of TornadoMan's attacks as well as I felt you should. Iria's responses to Tornado's comments more than covered that, though. Judge Points [Feel]: 8/10 - Not as epic perhaps as Raven went, but it had a good flow and mostly had the appropriate feel. Total: 93/100[/color]
Naming Raven8 as the winner of this RP fight.
40 EXP/400 Z for Iria [20/200 for Loss] [+15/150 for A Rank] [+5/50 for Finish]
50 EXP/500 Z for TornadoMan [30/300 for Win] [+15/150 for A Rank] [+5/50 for Finish][/color]
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Post by Raven8 on May 24, 2010 18:59:46 GMT -8
Due to TornadoMan not having stats yet, i'm giving Iria the winning EXP/Z.
Thanks for the rate, Stef =D
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